Nintara's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Winter Fit on a Cursed Night]

the anatomy seems a bit weird, but i like pretty much everything else about this

DoctorGrambo responds:

Thank you, dude!

[A Krampus]

pretty good, but the detail on the things on krampus kinda clashes with the krampus themself imo

[the Witch]

the little fellas remind me of the chocolate starfish and the hot-dog flavored water cover art, but its probably just a stretch

nashotobi responds:

definitely wasn't going for it. I guess just a basic design. I wanted to draw them obscure so the reader could question it as just the boy imagining what they look like.

[WORMBOY LIVES]

can i pet him

[1]

reallz good, but zou seem to have same face szndrome

[Fubuki]

pretty good but I think the crotch area is a bit too tight for a robe/skirt thingy like this

AKIBAfoxen responds:

To be fair, that's how it looks on the actual character

[Takara The Lucky]

its good but the nipple bulges are really distracting

MayoWarlock responds:

Oh thank you, sorry I'm a lewd artist so I kinda wanted to capture that HOTD schoolgirl look. But I do appreciate the feedback.

[Me x Sky She Still Hates Me]

you should probably take the time to learn how to construct heads and faces properly, they both feel kinda squished, I would recommend sketching a circle as the base for the head, using some construction lines to get the proportions right, and then sketching out the rest and making the lineart.

Also, heads dont bend like that, if youre going to angle the upper part of a head, its usually a good idea to angle the rest of the head the same way.

Other than that, the coloring, shading, and lineart seems to be relatively fine, but there are some problems:
-The eyes being so saturated doesnt really work in this context
-The line from the neck just next to your mouth bleeds over into the head and its really noticeable
-similiarly one of the lines on one of your eyes bleeds over into the head
-not only is the shading on the white part of your neck incomplete, but it seems to affect the lineart as well as the coloring. I recommend putting the shading layer on top of the coloring layer but below the lineart layer so it doesnt mess with the lineart

Good luck on the rest of your artistic journey and please dont take this too personally.

Co-lord44 responds:

I actually do that already for the first part. Still learning how to do things so give me a bit of a break.

And reading over a lot of the stuff I already do but at least you gave helpful advice and luck so I won't hold it against you. This was after all only a test so it's not going to be perfect. So thank you for helping as best as you can.